Drabble: Washed Away

[random-zombie.livejournal.com]

Title: Washed Away
Rating: G
Character: Jin
Word Count: 100


I've done things she doesn't approve of but that doesn't mean I'm no longer worthy of her love. I did it for her, always for her. To give her the life she deserves, to let her see how much I care.

She looks at the father of the little boy, like she used to look at me. With trust. With longing. One day she'll understand, she'll see the real me again. I know I've changed but I'm still the man she loves.

Then why does it feel like I washed her love away along with the blood on my hands?

Comments

[elina.livejournal.com]

Eep! Love this! It's the first time I've wanted to pet Jin and tell him everything will be alright. Awwww!

[random-zombie.livejournal.com]

Thanky. :) Lol. I'm sure poor Jin could use a little petting. Somewhere lurking in his controlling, apparently misogynistic heart {that is three sizes too small), lurks a decent guy. I'm hoping anyway. :p

[tears-of-nienna.livejournal.com]

It's the first time I've read anything from Jin's perspective. Of course he would see Sun looking at Michael, of course he would feel terrible--but most people (myself included) never stopped to give him a second thought.

Wonderful drabble. You've set the bar extremely high for everyone else.

[random-zombie.livejournal.com]

Wow. Thank you so much. *goofy grin*

I re-watched the episode where Jin is handcuffed after attacking Michael and started wondering what was going on in his head. I thought maybe this might be a little bit of it. I'm sure the watch was part of the problem, but I can't help thinking *he* knows that Sun and Michael have those smoldering looks passing between them.

I really hope the show does an episode from his perspective.

Thanks again for the lovely comment. :)

[yndigot.livejournal.com]

And sometimes the way he looks with those smoldering eyes above cheekbones you could use to cut cheese, you just know he's thinking that. ^_^ Nice job.