ext_60656 ([identity profile] sapphirewoman.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ficinabottle 2004-12-01 10:35 pm (UTC)

Ow, ow, owwwww!!! (That was the sound of my heart breaking, by the way :) )

I like how you wrote this realistically, yet were able to have Charlie be trying to be selfless for everyone. It really shows his evolution as a character.

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