OMG! lol I totally just said that to someone. I was responding to a response to my fic - lol don't worry not you. I think I can keep that straight... maybe - and I was all... just talking and talking and i realized I gave like four paragraphs to one sentence. Heehe! And I'm like "oh wow I'm babbling" and then I kept going. heeehe!
Yeah I know what you're saying. I've been hesitant about doing anything from Walt's POV because of the child-like thing. I tend to have swear words and harsh narration in my fics so it's weird... it woudl be a step out of my comfort zone, definitely.
I think once you get comfortable posting the fic - because Im telling the truth when I say you aren't lacking the writing chops - then things will just sort of... it'll feel better, trust me.
I mean if I were to give you any advice at all, it would be to really push for your narrative to feel like the character. You're already getting into that, and so you definitely know how to do it. I would just say to do it some more.
Oh and also, this is of course from my personal preference, how are you with writing in present tense instead of past. I dunno know why I'm all about present tense... *shrug* but I am. LOL. It's not like i dont like past or that i think you should do present... wow I think I'm babbling again! lol. I think what I'm just saying is that you definitely have the talent... and not like... practiced talent. I mean in your writing i can really see the real deal.
You know how some people can just practice and practice and practice... but it's never going to be right? Yeah you have what makes it right.
Wow. Babbling at 4 AM while eating cold pizza is funny.
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Yeah I know what you're saying. I've been hesitant about doing anything from Walt's POV because of the child-like thing. I tend to have swear words and harsh narration in my fics so it's weird... it woudl be a step out of my comfort zone, definitely.
I think once you get comfortable posting the fic - because Im telling the truth when I say you aren't lacking the writing chops - then things will just sort of... it'll feel better, trust me.
I mean if I were to give you any advice at all, it would be to really push for your narrative to feel like the character. You're already getting into that, and so you definitely know how to do it. I would just say to do it some more.
Oh and also, this is of course from my personal preference, how are you with writing in present tense instead of past. I dunno know why I'm all about present tense... *shrug* but I am. LOL. It's not like i dont like past or that i think you should do present... wow I think I'm babbling again! lol. I think what I'm just saying is that you definitely have the talent... and not like... practiced talent. I mean in your writing i can really see the real deal.
You know how some people can just practice and practice and practice... but it's never going to be right? Yeah you have what makes it right.
Wow. Babbling at 4 AM while eating cold pizza is funny.